I Need You….

 As said in the last post, i tried scribbling about “Lovveeee ” and this is all i could come up with…

“All is going so wrong,
evrerything seeming so blue,
I know that’s the moment,
I desperately need you…

Evrything around me is just so erratic,
I dnt seem to get a clue,
Mind wants to stop thinking,
And i just need you….

The world appears to ve turn a back on me,
Each feeling is illegible and new,
I am all surrounded by unknown,
And i hurriedly search for you….

With nowhere to go,
And nothing else to do,
The only truth is,


I want you and only you…………!!!!!!

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10 Comments Add yours

  1. Shilpi Gupta says:

    Hmm… true for all of us going through this phase of life. Well written … 🙂

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  2. Angie says:

    Yup… i knew u ll for sure relate to it !!!

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  3. Neelesh says:

    well written .. but tune tension de di ab to..beta its great u can sale this poem and get money… dont waste such talent .. smbody can use and earn by it..

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  4. Angie says:

    He he he.. ye to jyada ho gaya !!! 🙂 but nyways thnks fr the huge compliment!!!

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  5. Superb poem!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤

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  6. Anonymous says:

    Nice lines revealing true feelings……

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  7. Rahul Bhatia says:

    Very rhyming poetry.. nice one

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  8. Angie says:

    Hey thnks for dropping by Rahul !!! hope to receive more feedbacks from you in future…

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